Glad you're back! Story's not bad. A bit confusing at first, but got better as it went along.
Thanks for reading, Rachel. I'm sorry the story was confusing. I wish I had more time to polish it. It took me three days just to come up with the plot. Not a genre I work in, but it was fun. If I move on, I will only have three days to create, write, and polish . . . ugh!